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Post by Aminta on Mar 24, 2006 20:02:51 GMT -5
OH GOSH ITS PERFECT!
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Post by Sinyee on Mar 24, 2006 20:17:18 GMT -5
wow...that was really nice mei.....it actually ryhmed....unlike MY poems >.<
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Post by Sro on Mar 25, 2006 12:28:51 GMT -5
i wrote 2 poems on pg 1 which one's better??
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Post by Sinyee on Mar 25, 2006 18:07:15 GMT -5
they're all good to me...
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Post by Mei on Apr 20, 2006 18:34:44 GMT -5
u did? sry...i don't think i read them...
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Post by Mei on Apr 20, 2006 18:35:36 GMT -5
ok ok... now i did...they both really gewd
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Post by Carma on Apr 20, 2006 21:26:17 GMT -5
Sro, I liked the second better =)
Mei I have no comment. But that doesn't mean it's bad. It just means I can't think of anything to say because I can't relate. And I don't want to o.O
*** Contemplation
The extra beat I felt in my heart, The touch of your hand on mine. The rise and fall of life in you, The past I left behind.
The sure promise of trust in you, The sure promise of faith. The sure promise of togetherness, The sure promise of sate.
The taste of mint and lemonade, The taste of strawberries. The taste of fresh white snowy days, Your lips of flaxen tease.
The crumpled photo in my hand, The tears you couldn't see. The thought of your betrayalment, The memory of you and me <3.
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Post by Aminta on Apr 20, 2006 22:07:14 GMT -5
Oh.. wow. O-O Nice poem ya got there. Gawsh. We have a lot of great poets here. ^^ And don't be humble- you guys rule!! If only I could share.. All I have is the Ms. Sirris irony poem. Here's a preview: -_- Please don't laugh. Impatience
In a foreign city With trinkets galore Was a man and a woman And a kingdom and a war
He loved her dearly, Wished to stay forever But he was a soldier Settle down, he could never
The authorities called And ordered him out "Into the battle," Said blankly the scout
"Will you wait," he asked "For as long as it takes?" "even longer," she answered "Every day, not a break,"
It lurked in his thoughts And every day fears That nipped at his dreams And doubled his tears
She was in his thoughts Every minute and second He could think nothing but her It was his memories, I reckon
A walk through the beach Or dinner at night Tangled in arms That kept hope in sight
So he traveled again Shaken, unsettled And when he came back His hopes were nettled
He saw her with another And this broke his heart "You said you would wait," "You promised- right from the start,"
The woman was speechless And so was the man "I thought you were dead," "I moved on," she began
But he didn't bother To listen to her excuses He shot out the door Heart covered in bruises
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Post by Carma on Apr 21, 2006 22:45:19 GMT -5
What was that about not being humble? Hypocrite xD
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Post by Sinyee on Apr 22, 2006 13:24:22 GMT -5
xD...haha... my irony poem's pretty sucky...
You would suspect that A bully does mean things To trash others with words And hurt with fists You would expect to find A bully's house Full of plans of suffering and misery But would you suspect Him hiding in a corner Weeping with tears?
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Dun dun dun! xD
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